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Post by gray - - ★ on Apr 21, 2011 3:19:19 GMT -5
[TAWNYBIRD!!]
[her prefix is for her light colored patches all over her torbie body. her suffix is for her gracefulness and quickness.]
[SHE-CAT!!]
[SHADOWCLAN!!]
[TWENTY-FIVE MOONS!!]
[WARRIOR!!]
____________[LOOKS]
She's like your average she-cat. Really, when you look at her she sits no taller than the average she-cat and she is no more muscular than another. She stands at a height of eight inches but with her thick and long fur it can be deceiving. Around her neck is sort of like a mane, sticking out the most when not completely groomed. Her fur color is beautiful. She is a torbie, meaning she is tri-colored with tabby markings. She is brown, orange (or yellow), with white and tabby markings. But it is her eyes that hold the most beauty.
They are bold, dull yellow in color but dark and stunning. They are large and round but fit her face perfectly. They hold a lot of emotion when she wants to show them. But they have a secret that can just about be seen. It's sort of a mad look in her eyes, as if she is thinking something that only she knows and everyone around her should be suspicious.
Tawnybird only weighs about nine pounds. She can hold herself in a battle no problem but she is about average against another she-cat. Her muscles are hidden under her fur, giving her a feminine look too. She is slender under her fur and can slip through small spaces provided that her fur does not get caught.
____________[PERSONA]
[caring and uninterested]
Oh you got it all wrong if you think Tawnybird cares. She isn't the type to care about anyone but herself and possibly, at times, her Clan. She will not be the one to sit by and watch the innocent get hurt or killed though, but she acts on her own terms as far as rules go. She will follow most rules to an extend and she knows her place - most of the time. She doesn't give help to those she doesn't want to. Another thing that some get wrong is her interest in others' business. She pretends to be uninterested but when she wants information she will do almost anything to get it. She wants to know everything and not be left out at all. She likes knowing stuff so much she will not sleep when she thinks something interesting will happen. Don't mean she won't fall asleep in the process of waiting, but she tries her absolute best to stay awake.
[normal and unintelligent]
Tawnybird appears to be normal. She does the normal warriors' routine, smiles when others expect her to and does whatever else they might think is normal. But Tawnybird is far from normal. See, there is no real name for what she is except maybe a little bit mad. She has yet to go over the edge and has some control over most things. She appears to others as normal but her thoughts are definitely not. She sees things in a darker light; sort to speak. She also thinks things through till there is nothing left to think about. She tries to see through things and get to the core details. She is very much intelligent even though sometimes she will act not as such. It is her mask to hide who she is, to protect her thoughts and sanity.
____________[HISTORY]
Born to a fulltime Queen and a brave warrior, Tawnykit didn't have a normal kithood. From the start, with her brother Lizardkit, they both were not the playful type. They did so only when others were watching; turned on their fake smiles and tussled around like normal kits would do. But it was way too obvious that they just were not normal. Lizardkit was the quietest while Tawnykit tried her best to be as normal as can be. When it was time for their apprenticeship, Lizardpaw was given to the medicine cat but it was obvious he wasn't meant to be there. He held strength beneath is claws that any warrior fought to get. He was cold and quiet but followed rules and orders without questions. Tawnypaw followed her brother but she had a seemingly more saner mind than her brother. But with her brother's strength and Tawnypaw's seemingly normal ways, they kept the two, watched them grow, and never questioned their minds.
Their parents were normal, Foxbright was a happy tom but bragged a lot while Lilyclove was a fulltime queen after serving her Clan for thirty moons before hand. Their first little was Lizardtooth and Tawnybird. They were exceptionally happy with the two even when they were looked at as being strange. Lilyclove was over protective while Foxbright just backed up his mate because he loved both his kits and his mate. After the two became apprentices, they had another litter but this time they lost two and only one survived. Honeykit. She was very much normal compared to her older siblings and Tawnypaw tried her best to be the best big sister she could be but playing was not an option. Once Honeykit moved up in ranks, Tawnypaw and Lizardpaw did too. Honeykit became Honeypaw and Tawnypaw was dubbed Tawnybird and Lizardpaw became Lizardtooth.
____________[IC]
[this is actually from a different site, if you don't mind me using it;]
How was it that he got stuck staying within the nursery all the time? It wasn't fair that his siblings were allowed to do the things he wasn't allowed to do. Just because he couldn't see didn't mean he couldn't take care of himself. Besides, as long as Pouncekit stayed beside him nothing would happen right? No, Coalkit understood his mother's fear but wish she would just give him a chance to be a normal kit. Coalkit wanted to run and jump and chase things too. Wouldn't he learn how to do things on his own if everyone just stopped fussing over him? Coalkit had a head full of questions but kept his mouth closed as he didn't want to make the situation worse.
He was a quiet kit from the start and everyone probably guessed that he wouldn't be able to become a warrior. But Coalkit was determined to show everyone that he was fine and could hold his own. While his eyes could not see all his other senses have made up for it. He could hear better and smell better, but even so, Coalkit still needed the guidance of his brother, Pouncekit, to help him along.
With a short sigh, Coalkit felt his way out of the nursery and called out to his brother, "Pouncekit! Pouncekit! Can you come help me?" Coalkit perked his ears up and tried to listen to see is his brother had heard him. The noise around the camp was loud enough that if his brother did hear him, Coalkit couldn't tell. He heard the sound of warriors chatting around the camp, "How's the prey running?", "Hunting patrol is about to leave! Let's go!" and "This has got to be the best sunbathing rock around!". Sometimes, Coalkit wished he couldn't hear so well. He would trade half of all his other senses just to be able to see out of at least one eye.
Coalkit sat down outside of the nursery hoping Pouncekit had heard him. He turned his head to the sky but could see nothing. The best he could tell is that it was close to sunhigh or maybe it was just after. Only thing that Coalkit could tell the difference between with his eyes but how bright or dark it was. As odd as it sounds, Coalkit made a game out of it one day. He would tell when he might run into things when it got darker. But even with this game, Coalkit still ran into and tripped over things. Most of the time, if no one saw, he would just get right back up and continue going. He didn't like worrying anyone when there was nothing to worry about.
____________[FAMILY]
Lilyclove; mother - nursery (much like Ferncloud)
Foxbright; father - elders' den
Lizardtooth; brother - alive
Honeypaw; sister - alive
____________[PASSWORD]
aurora
____________[NOTES]
took some nighttime cold meds, so I was very tired when making this. XD please forgive any grammar or spelling errors if any. also apologize for it looking so squishy. if you need a roleplay sample with me using Tawnybird I can do that, just let me know.
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Post by Crane on Apr 21, 2011 18:29:37 GMT -5
This is perfect, fantastic first bio! Accepted! Just a note, however, due to our plot ShadowClan have been forced into WindClan territory (after a losing battle against ThunderClan and RiverClan) so when you want to roleplay you'll have to post there instead of in ShadowClan. Thankyou~
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