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Post by gingerpelt on Apr 29, 2011 21:57:48 GMT -5
[Gingerpelt!!] [Sly when need to and very kind to kits.!!]
[Female!!] [Windlcan!!] [23 moons!!] [queen!!]
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She Has bright yellow eyes and has a light tongue and light pink her ear's too.She also has white hair in her ears, which sort of muffles her hearing.She has long white whiskers on a dark pink nose.She is a dark brown cat, and they kind of go as waves.She has black at the tips of her ears and tail.Her pads are black.She has long claws that are a gray color.Her teeth are white, but the back teeth are starting to go yellow.Her tail is a bit longer then the height of her head, so it's a little short for her, but it doesn't bug her much. ____________[PERSONA] She is a young sweet cat who loves to be around kits.She is very patient and rarely get's mad at them, unless if they are really really being bad.She loves to lye in the sun when all the kits are asleep.She is very thoughtful about different things as well.She worry's a lot about the kit's when they tell her not too help, also with weather,war,etc.She can be very kind and she can comfort really well with her honey voice and her gentle touch.She gives respect for new mothers and will always be with them for her support to go to them.She knows the med. cat very well and helps him when a mother is giving birth. ____________[HISTORY]
She was born in Windclan with ginger colored fur with black tips on her ears and tail.Her brother was black and was younger then her.As she got older she loved to watch after the new born kits and hated leaving camp for her training, when she became a warrior she constantly stayed around the nursery, and actually has ended up safeguarding a couple kit's from running off,getting blown away, and starvation.She now always stays in the nursery, or around it and the kit's always behave them selves because of her, they also treat her with great respect.
____________[IC]
Gingerpelt lye on her side as a couple of kit's nestled into her side, seeking for warmth.She purred softly then wrapped her tail around them, she nuzzled each of them then woke up the other queen, and pointed out how one of the kit's were getting out.She lazily watched as the queen brought the kit back in then fell asleep.She yawned herself and went back to sleep, knowing it was going to be a busy day.Gingerpelt woke up,noticing that the two kits had left the den,she rolled her eyes and heaved to her paws then left to go find them.She stretched in the sun light and saw them chasing after the warriors, they were twitching their tails in annoyance as they pounced on them.Gingerpelt called there names, they looked up and slowly came to her.She shooed them away from the warriors then apologized for the kit's behavior.Kits, she thought chuckling to her self,"get over here you two it's time for breakfast,"she called and turned around to the fresh kill pile.
____________[FAMILY]
Father-Darkfang(windclan)-deceased Mother-Yellowbird(windclan)-deceased Brother-Whiteclaw(riverclan)-alive
____________[PASSWORD]
Aurora
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Post by Crane on May 8, 2011 5:46:58 GMT -5
Very nice bio, but one problem - where it says 'looks', you need to write a physical description. So things like eye colour, pelt, and anything else.
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Post by gingerpelt on May 9, 2011 18:01:24 GMT -5
fixed it ;D
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Post by Crane on May 14, 2011 4:09:08 GMT -5
Lovely, accepted!
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