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Post by it's FiSHY, scaredy-cat. on Jul 20, 2009 7:38:50 GMT -5
[Smokepaw] [My path is unclear; Please light my way]
[Male] [RiverClan] [8 moons] [Apprentice]
____________[LOOKS]
Smokepaw is a pretty average RiverClan apprentice. He is 100% RiverClan, though not as proud of it as his sister. His body is sleek and well suited to swimming with a bit smaller ears than normal and big, blue eyes. He is short-haired and has a light gray pelt. Though he may not look like it, he has a very muscular body and has lots of potential to become a good fighter - if only he had more confidence. He has big paws which act like flippers when he swims and looks very slim, even when well-fed.
____________[PERSONA]
Smokepaw has always been somewhat of an outcast and has always been very sensitive and moody. However, he is very curious and is always very tempted to pursue what he is looking for. Because his mother died giving birth and his father was killed in battle, he seems to be very cautious and often very quiet among those he doesn't know. He is closest to his sister, Larksong, and is very soft-spoken. He's very kind and humble to his friends and family, but lacks self-confidence. Smokepaw is also very alert to the slightest things and - to many's surprise - can be quite aggressive when someone he cares about is threatened or hurt. His day was always brightened by Larksong and rarely anyone else because it has always been hard for him to make friends. All in all, he may seem a pitiful cat but really he actually enjoys [some parts of] his life. He has learned to make the best of a situation and just needs some cats who he can trust and depend on when he's down.
____________[HISTORY]
Smokepaw was born to his parents along with his sister, Spottedkit and his brother, named Stormkit. He was somewhat of a runt (since he was smallest among his littermates), yet he was the only surviving cat of his mother's last litter. Pebblenose, his mother, died shortly after giving birth, but lived long enough to name each of her kits. Smokepaw had a hard time growing up. Because his mother wasn't there to feed him, he had to suckle from other queens, meaning he often had to go hungry for there was limited milk for all the kits. Both his brother and his sister died of hunger, which broke his heart because he was so close to them. Through all the hard times, it was his older sister, Larksong, whom accompanied him and visited him daily. Because of her, he had made it through and finally became an apprentice.
____________[IC]
Only if this is your first bio.
^Not my first^
____________[FAMILY]
Stormclaw - father Pebblenose - mother Larksong - sister Stormkit - brother (deceased) Spottedkit - sister (deceased)
____________[PASSWORD]
aurora
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Post by Tangle-chan on Jun 23, 2010 12:46:19 GMT -5
Nice job, Fishy. I loved it!
[Btw, how do you cross stuff out like that xD That's really cool!]
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