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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 19, 2010 6:15:14 GMT -5
Thanks. x3
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 19, 2010 6:09:53 GMT -5
x3 Oh. xD
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 18, 2010 18:19:57 GMT -5
Are you guys ever going to make another Newsletter?
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 18, 2010 7:09:28 GMT -5
[x]The sky is falling . [/font][/color] human race that we run
I’m Mistkit. I was born a female, and I’ll stay one. But I’m currently unborn. I'm a member of ThunderClan
I'm a kit [/size][/color] [x] It left me crawling
[/font][/color] , staring straight at the sun.
Mistkit's face is a near-perfect duplicate of her mother's. Her eyes are round, and pretty, and the way her muzzle and cheekbones are formed on her face, it emphasizes her amber eyes. Her muzzle juts at an acceptable length, and her cheekbones are perfect, and tapered just enough that it shows her eyes. Her ears sit perfectly upon her head with the acceptable white hairs curling about them, and still acceptably, stick out. They aren't too big or too small, or too triangular, they are perfect. They are tipped with black hair - proving that some one in her family was a wild cat (perhaps a grandparent.)
Her body is perfectly built. When she gets older, she'll have more of a defined, thin yet muscular shape, with long claws and teeth, with a long pelt, that she still has now. Her paws are regular sized. Her pelt is somewhat fluffy, and it thins out- slowly - when it gets hotter, but gets thicker again slowly. That's the disadvantage to having a pelt like hers. Mistkit's pelt is gray, like her mothers, with a few dark spots here and there. She has a long dark-gray stripe trailing down her spine, and ending at the tip of her tail, and along the tail, it trails out into thick stripes. Her under-belly is pure white, along with her muzzle. It splashes up her nose bridge, in between her eyes, before fading into grey. On her forehead is a dark-gray 'W'.
The stripes trail out from her eyes, ending at her neck. Along her there are more stripes, that end halfway down her forelegs. She also has darker spots, that are placed randomly along her sides. As they get closer to the stripes, they seem to somewhat connect to the stripes, and then they dissapear all together. Her nose is an acceptable pink. The lower edge of her eye[ the fur underneath her eye] is a light grey, and it follows the corner of her eye until the end.
The backs of her hind-legs are dark grey- and her heel an even darker grey. On her left-hind-leg, it's completely light grey, from the thigh, down to just a little past the center. It's striped, again with the dark gray we spoke of before. On her right foreleg, it's the same deal, only it's not completely all the way around. Her shoulders, actually, are free of the dark stripe that runs along her spine, although, along the shoulder blades, there are grey stripes running across them, that appeared halfway along her neck.
[x]Only a moment I notice
[/font][/color][/size] every dog has his days Mistkit is probably no where close to resembling her parent's personality, although there are few similarities. But we won't get into them just yet.Mistkit is rather tough and she acts more masculine than feminine at times, because she's just that odd. Odd in a good way, of course. She won't take any insults, or she just might come back with a hurtful retort. Sometimes, she gets so angry, that she has a hard time not mauling anyone. But, you'll be glad to know she doesn't. She is also very sensitive though - on the right day if you yell at some one else, infront of her, or yell at her, she might get a little scared. But, usually, she's not like that, so don't worry. She isn't scared of too many things, so it's nearly impossible to scare her.
She actually - suprisingly - has a very good bond with her mother, but kits are supposed to have bonds with their mothers, no? Anyway, other than what I just told you before, she's actually very nice. Protective as well - over her siblings and friends, because, to her, it is UNACCEPTABLE for her friends to be insulted, and she will hear of it, or find out about it. And then it won't be pretty. Well, not physically, but verbally. She doesn't want to be exiled. She's very loyal - fierce too - and she's strong, just like her mother. Mistkit sticks with the warrior code, but then again, she's not afraid to challenge it, if it means doing something that must be done, regardless of the consequences. Yes, she'd like to be leader one day. But she can wait, until she's old enough, and picked. No killing for her please.
This tough personality has another side too - a sweet innocent, and clean freak she-kit. Hard to believe? Well it's true. She doesn't really like it when others don't try to get to know her - it's not very fair. She can be nice, when she forces herself to be, which she doesn't really agree with, but if it's to make a friend, she's all thumbs. She gets jealous too, when her friends ignore her, and thats when her sensitivity comes in mind. So, she's tough, yet fragile.
[x]I paid attention
[/font][/color][/size] cost me so much today
She was.... born.
[x]Close your eyes and see
[/font][/color][/size] the skies are fallin' secret word AURORA comments HUGE. HUGE. HUGE. And It took me an hour atleast to finish. xD credits LYRICS - THE SKY IS FALLIN' - QUEENS OF THE STONE AGE
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 17, 2010 19:26:41 GMT -5
Since Crane and I put up a story, I've decided we should have critiques so we know what needs changing, and we would love some compliments. And I don't think this would be considered creativity. xD
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 14, 2010 18:07:46 GMT -5
Windblaze trotted torwards the base of High-Stones, her eyes catching the faint glitter of Moon-stone. How could StarClan allow this to happen? No no no. StarClan, stop this before it's too late. Should I even begin? She thought, feeling a bit irritated. StarClan wasn't listening. Well, who knows? They may of been. They might have been waiting for the right moment.
You know that feeling you get when someone isn't listening to you? Yeah, that's how Windblaze felt. Her mouth whittled away into a frown.Windblaze sat down. "Hello, Skyfire, how are you?" She smiled. She had been so used to her mentor standing next to her. But they had grown so far apart from when she was just 6 moons. She missed Rippedtail, but she had to move on. Heck, if she still needed a little help now and then she could ask.
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 14, 2010 17:44:14 GMT -5
ooc|| Bearpaw's played by Havok. Oceanstorm I believe is played by Wolfwind, and Silverpaw is... uh...
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 13, 2010 17:14:58 GMT -5
Body low to the ground and haunches raised, Mountainpelt creeped over undergrowth, spotting a crow. It wasn't often you'd spot one here, but who cared? She leapt. As it took off, she hooked the claws of one of her forelegs deep into it's skin. It let out a startling screech, but she used her other paw to force it back to the ground. She put a paw on it's neck. Just a little harder and she could snap it, thus breaking the spinal cord and somehow killing it, because then the jugular-vein would burst if she needed to bite it. She wouldn't. Despite all the anger (but she was completely afraid of him) she had for Noxshadow, and the fact that she had just run away from him, she didn't snap it's neck. Instead, she sunk her teeth into it's neck, and killed it.
ooc|| yeah, this is after he attacked her. Don't ask what I mean.x3
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 12, 2010 16:53:06 GMT -5
And she needs a mate.
and a plot maybe? Her bio's in the second page of accepted ShadowClan bios, btw. I'm too lazy to link it. D :
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 9, 2010 14:37:17 GMT -5
just a burden in my hand skyfeather into the desert : : ThunderClan. as thirsty as you are :: warrior crack a smile ::female and cut your mouth :: 16 moons Now that she's back in the atmosphere With drops of jupiter in her hair
Skyfeather is an average sized she-cat, with a very well built body.
The corners of her eyes are not parallel, and that IS normal. She has a normal length tail. Now let's move on to her muscles. Skyfeather isn't very strong to begin with, so she doesn't enjoy fighting. Not to mention she can't see. So she can hear very well, and scent prey easily, and feel vibrations. Her muzzle juts out just a bit, and her face is somewhat triangular, but that only makes her beautiful. Her ears are set upon her head perfectly - and they are perfect sized too.
Okay, now we move on to coloring. She has a light gray pelt, slashed with various stripes and spots too.
Okay starting with the face. She has a white muzzle, just a little of that white splashes up the bridge of her nose. Speaking of her nose, it's pink. Her face is light gray, with black stripes on her forehead, and trailing from the outer corner of her eyes. Her whiskers, are pure white, and they are not too long, not to short - average sized, more like it. The rest of her body, is gray, with black stripes as well. Her eyes are sky blue. Hence the name. And she is blind, so it doesn't really matter.
other things She's blind. If you didn't notice how her eyes are milky and how she can't see, then when she runs into a tree, then you'll find out. thin. WHAT DO YOU THINK.
fast. It's self explanatory.
She acts like summer and walks like rain Reminds me that there's time to change
personality
Skyfeather is a very friendly she-cat, and she isn't afraid to stand up for herself to begin with. She's hyper and seems to suffer from Attention Decifit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD), but she gets by. On bad days she doesn't really act hyper, but she is nice. She does get tired, although she seems like her energy is endless. She is intellegent - she finds herself correcting others sometimes. She uses words like,"juxtaposition" and some other big words, that I am too lazy to list.
She can be a big-fat jerkface if she wants to, and that might be alot of times. She might be hard to like, because she's so bi-polar. Despite the fact she is blind - which might be hard to believe because she is - she is actually extremely good at hunting, and she can distinguish the type of prey she is heading after. Usually, she chooses not to fight and to help with healing. Rarely she is forced to fight - but when she does, she's actually very good, all though she thinks she isn't.
Skyfeather is fierce, and here's why. She's not afraid to fight, even if she can't see what she's fighting, and she's not afraid to challenge anything. She knows what she's doing, don't get in her way, or try to pity her. She doesn't need it. Or want it. She's ambitious too. She really wants to kill Duskstar - she feels its one of her goals - but she wouldn't kill an innocent cat just to make herself leader. Although she wants to be leader.
Skyfeather has two voices. The one that is used basically all the time is the tough, tom-boy[dunno how you'd say it in catspeak] excited, crazy one, and then there's the rare sweet, quietish, cute, hard-to-not-like voice. Skyfeather is a bit of a kleptomaniac, meaning she might end up "accidentaly" with someone else's prey. Or it might actually be on accident. Since the return of her stay on the moon She listens like spring and talks like june
but tell me, did you sail across the sun
"She's beautiful..." A tired she-cat stirred, licking the newborn kit's gray fur, that was slashed with black stripes. The kit was born blind, and they had noticed her abnormally milky blue eyes, but they didn't care. Taking that into account, they had her supervised every waking minute of the day, and she knew it. She had improved hearing, due to her loss of sight, so she could hear whispers even though she was "sleeping".
Occasionally, she would get some, "Oh I feel bad for your kit" 's and some " Poor kit."'s. Oh, how it irritated her. She would show them. Once she was an apprentice, she certainly would.
Did you make it to the Milky Way To see the lights are faded
At a normal age of 6 moons, Skykit became Skypaw. Her mentor was a she-cat named Treeleg. She had disappeared when the poor apprentice was about 9 moons, but she had remembered everything her mentor had taught her, and so her new mentor, Ashflight - who was a tom - had picked up from where Treeleg left off. I have to tell you though, they didn't get along very well. But they had learned to cope with eachother, but it had taken a very long time.
And that heaven is overrated Tell me Did you fall for a shooting star
At 12 moons, Skypaw became Skyfeather. Atleast her family and her annoying mentor were still alive- not like they died or anything, that's too unoriginal - Her brother had gotten extremely sick, making him too weak to do anything, and it made him blind too, only he wasn't born that way. His name was Quetzalflight, he was about 20 moons when this happened, so he was made an elder before he was actually old enough to become one. Skyfeather seems to be doing very well as a warrior, no signs of becoming a premature elder.
kin [X]
MOMMA - Cometfur PAPA - Saltclaw BROTHER - Quetzalflight
so kiss me
secret word !
AURORA
comments !
UM SINCE I LIKE TYPING IN CAPS I'MMA TYPE IN CAPS. Just kidding. So, yeah, I think this bio was very good.
credits ! The first few lyrics for name, age, clan, rank, and the heading with the GEORGIA font - BURDEN IN MY HAND -SOUNDGARDEN. The other lyrics - DROPS OF JUPITER - TRAIN. So kiss me 'lyric'- KISS ME - SIXPENCE NONE THE RICHER
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 8, 2010 16:40:28 GMT -5
IRIDESCENTSIGHT. [my idea -growls-]
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 8, 2010 14:21:28 GMT -5
OOOOHH I WANNA JOIN.
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 7, 2010 18:20:07 GMT -5
"Weirdo." Alice muttered... Haha, no. It would not break the ice, it would only make her believe more and more that he was a physco. She yawned again. She was tired now, not bored. Okay, maybe a little bored too. But - there was nothing to do. But then she kicked him - if she could - in the crotch. "That's what you get for being a jerk." Alice hissed. He deserved it.
[OMIGAWSH. LIKE, I HAVE NO MUSE.]
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 6, 2010 19:33:26 GMT -5
GOLDENTOOTH
I dunno.
DOLECOMPANY.
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Post by W.in.DY. on Apr 6, 2010 19:27:29 GMT -5
"Why'd you do that?" She whined, wiping her mouth off. That felt so insanely uncomfortable, that it left her a bit... afraid. Not cool, b**ch. She couldn't do anything about it. Because she was too afraid, and because she didn't know what to do, and he'd probably kiss her again. [I'm saving muse so I can make a HUGGGGGGEEE POST. ;3 ]
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