Post by Eagleh on Feb 6, 2009 21:59:20 GMT -5
Name: ----------------------- Bluefang
Age: ------------------------- 20 Moons
Gender: --------------------- Female
Clan: ------------------------- WindClan
Rank: ------------------------ Deputy
Peltage:
Bluefang is a very charming cat. She has a relatively basic build, and simple, grey-blue fur. She doesn't groom herself as much as other cats, so she always seems like a bit of a mess. She has Grey-ish eyes, but it's hard to tell because they are clouded over. She has a odd face, but that is almost the only unique thing about her.
Her legs are a touch long, partially due to the fact that she is a WindClan cat, while her paws seem to be a touch small for her body. Her tail is about the same length as the rest of her body altogether, and the only different colors on her entire body are on her front right paw and her tail. These are colored a darker shade of the grey-blue on her coat, and they only barely stand out.
She has a thin, lanky build, and is very flexible. Her fur also protects her well from the elements of life, but is not a good shield for battle. If you feel it, this fur is slightly harsh and pointy if you brush it the wrong way, but if brushed the correct direction, it is exceedingly soft. She is flexible enough, some two-legs would think she doesn't have bones, and several cats would be impressed. This helps in her explorations, along with the slightly-small paws mentioned earlier.
Starting at her ears, she has an odd face on a normal head. Her ears are more pointed than most cats, and they catch sounds better than average ears, while her nose is small and definite. Her nose also has extra sensory pads inside it, which makes her able to smell better than average. Her eyes, however, are more slanted than normal, and she cannot see out of them very well. She has a slim muzzle that can fit in small hole that this cat may be curious about, making her that much more suited for the environment. Her face shows little emotion, and she knows this, so she shows emotion through actions. Her chin is just hat, a chin. There really isn't anything out of the ordinary about it, and that is what makes it stand out from the rest of her face.
Likes and Dislikes
Bluefang like to go hunting, and uses her hearing and smell to get through the area, her poor eyesight only seeing big things such as trees and clumps of tall grass. She has, more than once, gotten hurt in the forest do to unsuspecting limbs an rocks that jut in the path, but that helped her learn the environment around her much better.
She dislikes being picked on and tormented because of her poor eyesight, as the other cats have yet to realize that she is just as strong without her eyes as she would be with them. She also found that these skirmishes give her enough adrenaline to make her want to work just a bit harder for her clan every day.
Personality:
Bluefang is a curious, hard-working cat with the will to work harder and harder as she pushes through and overcomes her weaknesses. She has learned to live with her poor eyesight, but still pleads with starclan everyday for her sight back. If she is ever fortunate enough to get her sight back, she would be a formidable opponent in battle, and even more so in everyday life. But that has not happened yet, and it might not ever happen. But besides that, she loves to commune with other cats, and will always fulfill a promise, unless it goes against the warrior code. But sometimes, even that is forgone as she helps those in need. She also has a wickedly good memory. There isn't much to say about her, except that she loves to come up with totally random things to say, and loves to make others laugh.
She dislikes battle, but seems to have the upper hand, as blinding won't help whoever did it, and several cats take it easy on her, or perhaps taunt her, because of her near-blindness. She takes this to her advantage, and usually rocks, but she usually takes this fact for granted, and is temporarily shocked when an enemy cat isn't like that.
Bluefang also doesn't feel that she has the time, or patience, to get a mate. She feels as though she will have sharply limited freedom, and therefore does not allow herself to fall in love, which some consider a sharp drawback to life. She doesn't. She thinks it might just lead her to a positive lifestyle.
Apprentices aren't half bad in her opinion. They are just as eager as her to get through the day, and they are respectful, too. How does she know this? Well, of coarse! She's had one before! But she wants another one sometime. It's not like someday the world will change so apprentices don't exist. She wants to help several people through their apprenticeship, and she will in the future.
Bluefang adores the current leader, but can't help the fact that she feels like something dreadful is going to happen to her someday, so she has been working on her leadership skills. She hopes to be the future deputy, and would love for that to happen. She also liked the previous leader, but Snowstar was her favorite, and she wants to be the next. However, she does not brag about this thought, and would be deeply surprised if she was chosen.
History:
Bluefang grew up a full-blooded WindClanner, obeying clan laws and overcoming challenges that lie in her path. This has made her a very sturdy cat in life, and she loves to explore. She has loved to since she was a kit, and she probably always will. not much will change that fact. But she did have a life-threatening accident one day while exploring. She collided into a sharp rock in the fields, and broke her leg. She was alone, so she wasn't found for quite a while. When she was finally found, an hour or two later, she had almost lost her life to blood loss. She got back to camp and was saved by the medicine cat, but couldn't move around for a very long time. Now most of her exploring is done with a friend by her side, so she had somebody to help her out when she falls.
IC:
Most recent:
Halftail stumbled into the nursery absentmindedly while he was getting ready to head back to the elder's den to take a nap. "This isn't where I was going!" he stammered, after looking around. He couldn't decide what to say to these cats, and the new-born kits, as he stumbled upon them. He was about ready to go back, but he had to say something. He just wasn't sure what...
And to prove how I have improved:
Made after Riversong helped me:
Bluefang awoke as the sun peeked inside her den and seemed to invite her outside. It's warm rays forced her eyes open and brought her to life and dragged her by the tail out of her dream. She looked carefully around the cozy den, and then around the silent camp. By the looks of it, seemed to be the first cat awake on that fine morning.
She immediately wandered out of camp before she could be given an assignment, and she went straight to the fields to explore. If anything went wrong, she would have to deal with it herself, because nobody was going with her. The flowers were beautiful on that fine day, as a gentle breeze stirred the grass of new-leaf, and a bird twittered in the hills ahead. She pounced upon a large rabbit, drowsy from having just woken up from it's leaf-bare slumber. She buried it in a shallow, so she could return to it later.
She explored farther and farther into the large, mystifying grasslands. She explored a little more, caught some more prey, and drank some water from a natural spring. She was preparing to head back to her prey, and was having a great time, until It happened.
She was just passing by one of the only trees in the territory, and she tripped over a root jutting dangerously out of the ground, and crashed threateningly into a large, pointed rock. She felt a sudden burst of intense pain, and then she felt no more, for she had ripped a nerve, and broken a bone. She lay there for several hours, or at least it felt like it. However, it had only been one. She lacked the strength to drag herself back to camp, so she stayed, and eventually fell unconscious.
Other:
This is the best IC I have ever made! Woot!!!
Reason:
I really can be a good rper on this sight and I have improved dramatically, I just haven't used it on this sight yet...
Password:
ANTEDILUVIAN
Age: ------------------------- 20 Moons
Gender: --------------------- Female
Clan: ------------------------- WindClan
Rank: ------------------------ Deputy
Peltage:
Bluefang is a very charming cat. She has a relatively basic build, and simple, grey-blue fur. She doesn't groom herself as much as other cats, so she always seems like a bit of a mess. She has Grey-ish eyes, but it's hard to tell because they are clouded over. She has a odd face, but that is almost the only unique thing about her.
Her legs are a touch long, partially due to the fact that she is a WindClan cat, while her paws seem to be a touch small for her body. Her tail is about the same length as the rest of her body altogether, and the only different colors on her entire body are on her front right paw and her tail. These are colored a darker shade of the grey-blue on her coat, and they only barely stand out.
She has a thin, lanky build, and is very flexible. Her fur also protects her well from the elements of life, but is not a good shield for battle. If you feel it, this fur is slightly harsh and pointy if you brush it the wrong way, but if brushed the correct direction, it is exceedingly soft. She is flexible enough, some two-legs would think she doesn't have bones, and several cats would be impressed. This helps in her explorations, along with the slightly-small paws mentioned earlier.
Starting at her ears, she has an odd face on a normal head. Her ears are more pointed than most cats, and they catch sounds better than average ears, while her nose is small and definite. Her nose also has extra sensory pads inside it, which makes her able to smell better than average. Her eyes, however, are more slanted than normal, and she cannot see out of them very well. She has a slim muzzle that can fit in small hole that this cat may be curious about, making her that much more suited for the environment. Her face shows little emotion, and she knows this, so she shows emotion through actions. Her chin is just hat, a chin. There really isn't anything out of the ordinary about it, and that is what makes it stand out from the rest of her face.
Likes and Dislikes
Bluefang like to go hunting, and uses her hearing and smell to get through the area, her poor eyesight only seeing big things such as trees and clumps of tall grass. She has, more than once, gotten hurt in the forest do to unsuspecting limbs an rocks that jut in the path, but that helped her learn the environment around her much better.
She dislikes being picked on and tormented because of her poor eyesight, as the other cats have yet to realize that she is just as strong without her eyes as she would be with them. She also found that these skirmishes give her enough adrenaline to make her want to work just a bit harder for her clan every day.
Personality:
Bluefang is a curious, hard-working cat with the will to work harder and harder as she pushes through and overcomes her weaknesses. She has learned to live with her poor eyesight, but still pleads with starclan everyday for her sight back. If she is ever fortunate enough to get her sight back, she would be a formidable opponent in battle, and even more so in everyday life. But that has not happened yet, and it might not ever happen. But besides that, she loves to commune with other cats, and will always fulfill a promise, unless it goes against the warrior code. But sometimes, even that is forgone as she helps those in need. She also has a wickedly good memory. There isn't much to say about her, except that she loves to come up with totally random things to say, and loves to make others laugh.
She dislikes battle, but seems to have the upper hand, as blinding won't help whoever did it, and several cats take it easy on her, or perhaps taunt her, because of her near-blindness. She takes this to her advantage, and usually rocks, but she usually takes this fact for granted, and is temporarily shocked when an enemy cat isn't like that.
Bluefang also doesn't feel that she has the time, or patience, to get a mate. She feels as though she will have sharply limited freedom, and therefore does not allow herself to fall in love, which some consider a sharp drawback to life. She doesn't. She thinks it might just lead her to a positive lifestyle.
Apprentices aren't half bad in her opinion. They are just as eager as her to get through the day, and they are respectful, too. How does she know this? Well, of coarse! She's had one before! But she wants another one sometime. It's not like someday the world will change so apprentices don't exist. She wants to help several people through their apprenticeship, and she will in the future.
Bluefang adores the current leader, but can't help the fact that she feels like something dreadful is going to happen to her someday, so she has been working on her leadership skills. She hopes to be the future deputy, and would love for that to happen. She also liked the previous leader, but Snowstar was her favorite, and she wants to be the next. However, she does not brag about this thought, and would be deeply surprised if she was chosen.
History:
Bluefang grew up a full-blooded WindClanner, obeying clan laws and overcoming challenges that lie in her path. This has made her a very sturdy cat in life, and she loves to explore. She has loved to since she was a kit, and she probably always will. not much will change that fact. But she did have a life-threatening accident one day while exploring. She collided into a sharp rock in the fields, and broke her leg. She was alone, so she wasn't found for quite a while. When she was finally found, an hour or two later, she had almost lost her life to blood loss. She got back to camp and was saved by the medicine cat, but couldn't move around for a very long time. Now most of her exploring is done with a friend by her side, so she had somebody to help her out when she falls.
IC:
Most recent:
Halftail stumbled into the nursery absentmindedly while he was getting ready to head back to the elder's den to take a nap. "This isn't where I was going!" he stammered, after looking around. He couldn't decide what to say to these cats, and the new-born kits, as he stumbled upon them. He was about ready to go back, but he had to say something. He just wasn't sure what...
And to prove how I have improved:
Made after Riversong helped me:
Bluefang awoke as the sun peeked inside her den and seemed to invite her outside. It's warm rays forced her eyes open and brought her to life and dragged her by the tail out of her dream. She looked carefully around the cozy den, and then around the silent camp. By the looks of it, seemed to be the first cat awake on that fine morning.
She immediately wandered out of camp before she could be given an assignment, and she went straight to the fields to explore. If anything went wrong, she would have to deal with it herself, because nobody was going with her. The flowers were beautiful on that fine day, as a gentle breeze stirred the grass of new-leaf, and a bird twittered in the hills ahead. She pounced upon a large rabbit, drowsy from having just woken up from it's leaf-bare slumber. She buried it in a shallow, so she could return to it later.
She explored farther and farther into the large, mystifying grasslands. She explored a little more, caught some more prey, and drank some water from a natural spring. She was preparing to head back to her prey, and was having a great time, until It happened.
She was just passing by one of the only trees in the territory, and she tripped over a root jutting dangerously out of the ground, and crashed threateningly into a large, pointed rock. She felt a sudden burst of intense pain, and then she felt no more, for she had ripped a nerve, and broken a bone. She lay there for several hours, or at least it felt like it. However, it had only been one. She lacked the strength to drag herself back to camp, so she stayed, and eventually fell unconscious.
Other:
This is the best IC I have ever made! Woot!!!
Reason:
I really can be a good rper on this sight and I have improved dramatically, I just haven't used it on this sight yet...
Password:
ANTEDILUVIAN
