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Post by featherwhisker on Jul 15, 2009 14:36:52 GMT -5
[NAME!!]: Hateclaw
[DEFINITION!!]: A dark river
[GENDER!!] Female
[CLAN!!]: ShadowClan
[AGE!!]: 59 moons
[RANK!!] Warrior
____________[LOOKS]
Hateclaw is a solid black she-cat with one blue eye and one green eye. In the sunlight, cats can see a slightly lighter patch on each shoulder shaped like a lightning strike. She has long legs with very large claws at the ends and a striking amount of scars across her pelt. Her right ear has a hole where a cat's canine tooth punctured. She has a perpetual limp because in a fight it was crushed by some rocks. It looks normal, but she never walked right after that incident. Her body looks like that of a small cheetah's, enabling her to run faster.
____________[PERSONA]
Hateclaw is considered by her Clanmates to be crude, dangerous and a dark sense of humor. She would kick a cat off a cliff just for laughs or kill a cat out of cold blood. She's unpredictable. Her temper gets the best of her, so she ofter causes squabbles among her own Clan. If she has a nice side, no one has seen it.
She thinks StarClan puts her in nasty situations on purpose, so she lost her faith in them long ago. Or so she thought. She has a little faith left, little does she know. She just wants to go her way. And she will kill anyone who tries to stop her. Its a miracle she's still in the Clan.
Most ways, she's different. She fights when she oughta deal. She runs when she oughta fight...most of the time.
____________[HISTORY]
Hateclaw originally was a rogue. So she doesn't talk much about her history. She fought in a huge battle when she came to ShadowClan. Her mate died in the battle and this pain caused her to lose her faith in StarClan. Before this, She was a StaClan lovin', StarClan fearin' cat. She thought StarClan would just as soon spit in your prey, but at least they gave you some prey. She's not like that now.
She lives up to her name. She always had enemies. Most of which want to kill her. So she stays in the Clan for that reason.
____________[IC]
Only if this is your first bio.
____________[FAMILY]
Stormi (sister, a rogue), Blacki (dead father), River (dead mother)
____________[PASSWORD]
MRRRWR
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Post by Crane on Aug 28, 2009 2:49:41 GMT -5
Feather, this is a great bio, but 1. It's in the wrong spot, and 2. What kind of leader would name a cat Hateclaw? It's pushing the limit a bit so could you change it to something like Lightningclaw?
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