~I'll Sail With You Once More

[wolfwind]

Every night and every day
You and I found out new ways
Towards a life that's new, unexplored
I'll sail with you once more

From what I can tell is true
I sailed these seas with you
Captured dreams that brought us close
Just finding out was faux

Never once had I dissagreed
From what you wanted, sure you seemed
Sailing seas and chasing dreams
I'll sail with you once more

[Crane]

That's really pretty Wolfwind x3

[it's FiSHY, scaredy-cat.]

O.O

Ditto Crane 100%

xD It is! Although one suggestion: maybe you can add the word "have" after "I" in the second line of the second stanza, because that line throws the beat off a bit ^^


But all in all, it's really amazing!

[wolfwind]

thanks guys! and ill write that on mai paper fishy.